Proofreading Requested

[Niami DenMother]

My eyes are tired, my brain is mush, and I wrote much of this in the wee hours.

Can folks take a look at the Revamp of the Status Items for Tradeskillers (http://eq2.eqtraders.com/articles/article_page.php?article=g29&menustr=040000000000) document and see what is as clear as mud, and other such stuff?

Don't be surprised if you reload and see images start popping up. I'm coding them in now. :)

Thanks!

[KTriol]

WOOT!

Looks good so far to me. No major typos jumped out at me .. of course I have only had 1 sip of Pepsi so ... /shrug.

The only thing I would have you add to is for the Home Crafting Stations.
You have them only listed for the City Merchant (requiring a Guild) but Domino did add them to the Crafting Societies as well ..
Same Prices for both Simple (requires 10k Faction) and Elaborate (requires 30k faction)


Edit Add!!

Okay now that you have the pixs up .. I have noticed that you don't have the STATUS cost for most of the items up. Usually, it was the same Faction amount so you might have miss-understood my PM ... if it said ie: .. 30K Faction/Status .. I meant that to mean that Not only did the person need to reach 30K faction (warmly) but they also had spend 30K Status to buy the item. .. make sense? kk? :)

[Niami DenMother]

WOOT!

Looks good so far to me. No major typos jumped out at me .. of course I have only had 1 sip of Pepsi so ... /shrug.

The only thing I would have you add to is for the Home Crafting Stations.
You have them only listed for the City Merchant (requiring a Guild) but Domino did add them to the Crafting Societies as well ..
Same Prices for both Simple (requires 10k Faction) and Elaborate (requires 30k faction)

Thanks! Adding that quickly before hubbyogre and I head out for errands.

[Domino]

I spotted one typo in the link to the status clothing page.

Also, in the status clothing page it might be worth noting the "forge" look set is available in all cities now (appropriately renamed).

[Niami DenMother]

Thanks! I'll fix those on my next edit through.

Many thanks go to Kaisha for the images and the many nudges to do something with 'em when I kept getting sidetracked in the last couple months. It really is something we've needed around here for a while

One thing I noticed while doing this was that the status costs for titles in the newer cities seem a bit askew compared to the other cities (20K even instead of scaled by tier), and I'm still wondering if it is a copy/paste coding error, or a change to title costs that never was fully implemented.

[Domino]

Hm, probably a copy/paste error, I've made a note to check it when I'm back in the office.